1/11/2015 12:43:15 am
I love the clarity and reflection of the water droplet picture! I'm not a fan of the gray paper star picture. I think you could improve it by using a different, more contrasting background color, and focusing on the part of the star closet to the front. My favorite picture is the last one! You've got me stumped as to what it actually is :)
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Amin Aboujouda
1/12/2015 01:08:15 am
These are great photos. Very well done! For me the best photo was the gray star paper sculptor. The 3D effect and clarity of the photo was outstanding. I feel you could improve on the rock/dirt photo a little, it was a bit plain and I felt there was to much blur maybe crop out a little of it.
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1/12/2015 01:11:28 am
I like them all. I love the water one and the little shredded stuff kinda blurred. I like the shape o your paper sculptures. I think for the chain and the silver thing you should have less blurred so you can tell what it is.
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1/12/2015 01:17:27 am
All these photos are great, my favorite is the one with all the lines that looks like a part of a feather or something other. In that photo I like the texture and how its a photo that your uncertain about and leaves you thinking, but in my opinion I would consider having more off the photo in focus instead of just a slight amount of it. In the paper sculptures photos I think that they are too simple I wish that it would've had a more eye catching effect or brighter more standing-out color in it. Overall great photos
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1/12/2015 01:28:04 am
My least favorite photo is the 5th photo. It really has no subject and is kinda boring. Otherwise, I love the rest of them! ne change I would of made is brighten up the 3rd one a bit to make those things complete.
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